Lord's Prayer read metaphorically

Lord's Prayer read metaphorically through the eyes of a modern day's coach:

Our dreams are fruits of our minds,
name them and be filled with awe.
What can be shaped in minds,
can also be shaped on earth.
Claim what you need to thrive,
but save excess for others.
Apologise for failure to please,
and forgive those who fail to please you.
Keep principle above desire,
and possibilitiy above threat.

The Original, as found in the Bible, Matthew 6:9-13:

"Our Father in heaven,
hallowed be your name.
Your kingdom come,
your will be done,
on earth as it is in heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread,
and forgive us our debts,
as we also have forgiven our debtors.
And lead us not into temptation,
but deliver us from evil."